Third Cut

• Added an extra scene of the protagonist getting ready to reinforce the idea of the film being a coming of age film, and to extend the opening sequence.
• Added a short scene between when they find the research lab and the clone by filming their feet walking to ensure that the scenes looked fluid
• Distributed the titles more evenly.
• Made sure the music continues when they are speaking

What went well

We managed to make our opening scene longer by adding a scene showing the protagonist getting ready.

Issues

When we had edited our third cut, we found that there were a few mistakes we had made.

Timing

The length of the shots of josh getting ready will need to be re filmed.

Text

The text does not stand out as the lighting and text are too bright.

Shots

Some of the shots we took of the protagonist getting ready will need re filming as they were too long, and there was too much camera movement.

Sound
We still have not recorded the news reporters voice over. Also the fading of the music is too sudden.

Improvements to make

• Record the voice over of a reporter. This will give the audience a better insight to the narrative and allow us to experiment with cross cutting techniques.
• Change the colour of the text
• refilm some of the shots of Josh getting ready. Without camera movement.

Learning comment

Throughout filming I have learnt that is important to avoid camera movements. It is much better to do different shots from alternate angles then to follow something with the camera.