Second Cut

• Removed the word 'starring' from the titles.
• Moved the titles around
• Made the titles smaller.

What went well

We moved the titles so that the film title did not appear over two different shots. We also used adobe after effects to edit the colour of the clones eyes.

Issues

When we had edited our second cut, we found that there were a few mistakes we had made.

Timing

The cycling sequence is too fast in some areas.

Text

The text is still spread throughout the opening sequence unevenly. The credits are also in the wrong order. 

Shots

Some of the shots we took will need re filming as the angles we used were not suitable and their We still have not refilmed certain shots which means some of the footage is out of focus and our opening sequence is not long enough.

Improvements to make

• Add an extra scene of the protagonist getting ready to reinforce the idea of the film being a coming of age film, and to extend the opening sequence.
• Add a short scene between when they find the research lab and the clone by filming their feet walking to ensure that the scenes look fluid
• Distribute the titles more evenly.
• Make sure the music continues when they are speaking
• Record the voice over of a reporter. This will give the audience a better insight to the narrative and allow us to experiment with cross cutting techniques.

Learning comment

Throughout filming I have learnt that it is important to refer to other movie openings or title sequences when creating the titles. If we had done this the credits would not be in the wrong order.