Monday, 7 November 2016

Draft & Final script


Draft





A small dark council house in a quiet city area. There are sounds of a TV in the background and there are only two people home; Tom and his mum.

Tom opens door and begins to exit

Toms mum
“Good bye T-“

(Tom completely ignores her cutting her off by putting his headphones in and putting his backpack on)

*Popular 80’s music plays*



A quiet street lined with houses. The walls are covered with graffiti.

Tom leaves the house, shuts the door and picks up his bike and cycles down the road, further down the road Tom’s friend cycles next to him and they nod to each other




A larger, wider road with less houses.

tom and his friend see a figure led in the middle of the road and skid to a stop, they get off their bikes

Tom takes out his headphones

Tom
“What is that?”

Toms friend
 “I dunno, just turn him over and see if he’s alright or something”

Tom walks over and rolls the figure over


The clone opens its eyes


Second attempt 


 

 





SCRIPT



AMBLIN ENTERTAINMENT LOGO ANIMATION APPEARS


A small dark council house in a quiet city area. There are sounds of a TV in the background broadcasting a news story about clones. There are only two people home; Michael and his mum. Michael is a teenage boy who is wearing a check shirt and a denim jacket. A faint 80’s song is playing the background.

Michael opens door and begins to exit.


Michael mum
“Good bye M-“

Michael cuts her off by putting headphones in (songs volume increases to maximum volume), then puts his backpack on. He leaves the house.

Slow zoom onto news story behind him.

Reporter:
“Later this week Clone Intelligence Research & Development, more commonly known as CIRD produced their first clone.”


HUMANOID TITLE APPEARS


A quiet street lined with houses. The walls are covered with graffiti. Michael leaves the house, shuts the door and picks up his bike which is laying on the floor outside the house. Michael then cycles down the road.

Cross cut to news coverage

Reporter:
“However due to a breach in security the clones created have broken loose from their quarters and are now on a will of their own accord.”

Further down the road Tom’s friend Joseph appears. Joseph is wearing black glasses, and a bright ski jacket. He begins to cycles next to Michael and they nod to each other.
Reporter:
“Doctor John Smith who led the team of experimenters is currently being held for questioning under the assumption that the clones escape was not accidental. Please be advised that the clones created have not yet been tested”



Cross cut to news coverage

Reporter:
“And therefore may be dangerous”



A larger, wider road with less houses.


The two boys see a figure led in the middle of the road and skid to a stop, they get off their bikes to investigate.


Michael
(Michael takes out his headphones)
“What is that?”


Joseph
“I dunno, just turn him over and see if he’s alright or something”


Michael walks over and rolls the figure over.


Clone
(opens its eyes)


a close up of the clones red eyes.







 

Final attempt 



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